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Slain Man

Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2012 5:49 am
by Jeffrum Thompson
Slain Man

Scurrying around for nothing,
Lost in a world of pollution.
An overwhelming sense of longing,
Is there no solution?

Narcissistic world of many,
Malice towards our institution.
An inescapable trap for any,
Never giving resolution.

Re: Slain Man

Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2012 10:08 pm
by Legalize It
This is clever, I really like it. Good job!

Re: Slain Man

Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2013 4:15 am
by NellDikson
Why did the poet use "he" instead of "I" in the title?
Why did the poet switch pronouns throughout the poem: "We" in stanza 1 and "you" in stanza 5

Re: Slain Man

Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2019 2:34 pm
by eric52
tight rhyme