My favorite poem that I wrote

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Bigk75
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My favorite poem that I wrote

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THE DARK SIDE:
The sky stays in place
As the world moves around
Charred trees blow ash and smoke
Into the eyes of troubled onlookers
Houses and buildings crumble into dust
Blood and sweat turn the oceans a permanent shade of red
All life stops...
Silence is the only sound
Void is the only sight
Everything gone in the blink of an eye
Dark clouds filled with pollution and hate
Crowd the sky, choking off the sun
Plants wilt, bearing only bad fruit
All hope is lost in this Armageddon
Or is it?
In the midst of all of the pain and suffering
A single raindrop falls from those dark clouds
It drops from the sky and gently lands on a small, dead plant
The wilted brown vegetation sprouts to life
A vibrant shade of green in a world of nothing but black
Out of a small plant, struggling to survive in such a harsh environment
New life begins...
SalDawod
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Re: My favorite poem that I wrote

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Great poet from you i wish to hear from you always..
Kokz143
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Re: My favorite poem that I wrote

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Splendid words! Keep them coming :)
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