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allies94
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poem.

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“This is the last one.”
I told them.

I simply can’t bear to wait a moment longer.

Glances are thrown,
eyes are rolled,
they shake their heads at my lie-

leaving me to my habit.

In an eccentric world such as ours,
with no one to call true,
this smoke gives me comfort;

concealing her evils with beauty-
a dark shadow cloaked in sunlight.

It’s pleasant
to be dependent
on something other than each other.
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Did you wrote that ?? :eek:
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allies94 - that's a clean shot; aim another - eric
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